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Task 1建議寫作段落order~~
(1)Introduction (即將題目換句話說，換越多字越好)
(2)* Main trend
* A圖的次要趨勢及上升/下降細節說明
(3)B圖的次要趨勢及上升/下降細節說明
(4)A和B圖之間的比較或相對應關係(重要!!!)
(5)Conclusion(將main trend換句話再更簡單扼要說一次)
Introduction建議寫法
這個真的很好用!!!不管任何題目第一句考慮直接套用就對了!!!
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Given |
is/are + the/one/two |
diagram |
demonstrating |
圖主要內容 |
字彙的替換，會在題目那邊最常出現的大概有幾個重要的字．
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group |
percentage |
number |
spend |
make up |
area |
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category |
ratio |
figure |
cost |
constitute |
region |
因為通常都會有兩個圖形一起出現，因此建議以下的寫法，接在那句開頭句之後．
One reveals +(A圖的內容) while the other highlights +(B圖的內容).
或
It/They demonstrate(s) both +(A圖的內容) and +(B圖的內容) at the same time.
或甚至可再其後再加
It is clear that the former …while the latter…
舉某個蠶寶寶生活史的圖形為例
換字如果換得多，可能可以一下子字數就多了一倍以上，近1/3就完成了
(題目是)
The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.(共19字)
(Selena’s) 每個顏色各有相對應寫法，一次呈現兩個單字，分數可能會較高)~~
Given is one illustration demonstrating both the life cycle of the silkworm and the phases in the manufacture of silk cloth at the same time. It is crystal clear that the former consists of four stages while the latter is composed of five steps.(共44字)
要點
(1)Given is one illustration/diagram/table/chart/figure + demonstrating/
revealing/highlighting/showing/displaying both….and…at the same time.
(2)It is crystal clear…...
用來帶出每個趨勢，所以任何趨勢要寫時前面都可以加，非常好用!!!
(3)The former….the latter…
這當然也是比較high-level的寫法，能夠用到最好一開始就用，加深考官印象
(4)consist of 對上be composed of，而stages對上steps對上phases
每次帶出趨勢前，加的開頭句，每個都用不同的，呈現字彙level 盡量多替換
Adj Noun / Verb Adv. minimal increase / increase minimally reach a peak drop / fall reach an all-time low
其實意思也就是”非常明顯 + (接下來你要講的趨勢).”
當然，副詞的部分，
slow
slight
steady
gradual
dramastic
steep
rapid
sudden
sharp
drastic
considerable
significant
abrupt
tremendous
profound
devastating
rise/ raise
augmentation / augment
advance / advance
growth / grow
soar
climb / climb
escalation / escalate
surge / surge
slowly
slightly
steadily
gradually
dramatically
steeply
rapidly
suddenly
sharply
drastically
considerably
significantly
abruptly
tremendously
profoundly
devastatingly
be at a peak
go through the roof
reach a plateau
reach an all-time high
decrease / decrease
decline / decline
reduction / reduce
plunge
plummet
dwindle
take a nosedive
reach a low point
dip
come to the rock bottom
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It is |
strikingly evident that… |
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It goes without saying that…. |
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One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the diagram is that… |
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To begin with |
secondly |
furthermore |
lastly |
再回頭看那個蠶寶寶生活史的題目，我的寫法是~~
(這兩段裡面用到13個不同的時序副詞，當然這絕對非最好用法，但概念就是用越多越好)
At the very beginning, a female moth lays dozens of extremely tiny eggs
which subsequently hatch and develop into larvae after approximately 10 days. Young tender mulberry leaves are required at this moment to provide the grubs with profoundly abundant nutrition for growth. Following this is a process of spinning cocoons in order to permit the development of the pupa or chrysadis, which generally takes 4 to 7 weeks or thereabouts before reaching the final stage in which adult moths eventually emerge from those cocoons.
As it proceeds to the phrase of forming cocoons, a number of them are initially selected out, submerged into a whole pot of water and sequentially boiled. Afterward they are unwound to unbelievably long threads ranging from 300 to 900 meters, twisted thereon, woven into a piece of work later and ultimately dispatched to be dyed.
