201301281123102年學測英文作文命中!!!



102年學測英文作文又再度命中!!! 實在是就感心ㄟ(命中題目請參考相片簿裡的內容唷)

第一張圖是呂晨歆同學學測前幾週前,自行練習作文,所提供給我的題目,我還幫她改了

三次rewrite,最後一次是在上週的時間點而已,不得不說呂同學真的非常幸運,但我更相信

她本身的認真與配合,幾乎每一篇都乖乖按照普雷老師給她的建議,按步就班的rewrite

以下是她的最後rewrite內容

 

Sunny is a kind-hearted model student. Everyone is fond of keeping her company because she always expresses spontaneous enthusiasm for helping those who need assistance. She is just like a sun giving others boundless energy and warm comfort. One day as usual, she took the MRT of Dan-Shui line for school. Sunny found a vacant seat for a priority seat, taking a seat and then starting to recite vocabulary for the quiz this morning.

Before long, the MRT arrived at the next station. On the platform stood a young woman, wearing a loose skirt like a maternity dress. As she boarded the MRT, Sunny noticed the woman who shed warmth of mother affection looked plump with her belly slightly bulging. Sunny guessed that young woman would be pregnant. She stood up immediately, yielding her vacant seat to that woman. ”You are pregnant. The seat is for you,” Sunny said courteously. To her surprise, that woman turned annoyed. “I am not pregnant,” She replied coldly with words uttered literally. Under this awkward circumstance, Sunny just wanted to dig a hole to hide herself. How embarrassing the situation was! 

 

第二張圖是在我講義當中的學測考題分析特別舉出來的例子,大致也是在講博愛座的禮讓問題,

只可惜沒在最後關頭給所有高三生練習到,只能說有些同學生不逢時了。

 

Anyway, 至少這次的考題還是在我們的掌握之中,一如預期的考出三張圖囉!!!

Good luck for everyone and keep going la~~~

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